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Compared with the analogous ODF docs, this new planning page is on the right track but is still less actionable for the target reader: a cluster admin who is deciding how to deploy Ceph before installation. The main differences I noticed from ODF's planning and architecture docs are:
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docs/en/storage/storagesystem_ceph/planning.mdx (2)
32-37: Consider clarifying day-2 operations applicability for each deployment pattern.The table now provides a good comparison of deployment models with management ownership boundaries. However, the past review feedback also suggested indicating which ACP day-2 operations (monitoring, expansion, upgrades, backup, etc.) still apply in each model, particularly for external deployment where operational boundaries differ. Consider adding a brief note either in the table or in the surrounding paragraphs about operational scope differences.
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Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed. In `@docs/en/storage/storagesystem_ceph/planning.mdx` around lines 32 - 37, Add explicit day‑2 operations applicability for each deployment pattern in the existing comparison table: for rows "Internal, co-resident", "Internal, dedicated nodes", and "External" list which ACP day‑2 tasks still apply (monitoring, expansion, upgrades, backups, etc.) and which are the responsibility of an external team; implement this by either adding a new "Day‑2 operations" column to the table or a short explanatory paragraph below the table that maps each pattern to the applicable operations and ownership boundaries, ensuring the "External" row clearly states which ops remain with ACP (e.g., consuming storage classes, backup configuration) versus the external storage team's responsibilities (e.g., cluster expansion, Ceph upgrades).
56-71: Security section is focused but may benefit from broader coverage.The current security planning section focuses exclusively on encryption in transit, which is covered thoroughly. For more comprehensive planning guidance, consider whether to add brief mentions of other security planning areas such as encryption at rest, authentication model, or RBAC planning—even if only as forward references to other documentation sections.
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Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed. In `@docs/en/storage/storagesystem_ceph/planning.mdx` around lines 56 - 71, The Security Considerations section currently only covers "Encryption in Transit"; expand it by adding brief forward-reference paragraphs under the "Security Considerations" header that call out other planning areas: "Encryption at Rest", "Authentication Model", and "RBAC/Authorization", and link each to their respective how-to or planning pages (e.g., add references similar to the existing "Configure in-transit encryption" link). Keep each new item 1–2 sentences explaining what to validate (e.g., key management for encryption-at-rest, identity providers and Ceph auth for authentication model, and role definitions for RBAC) and add pointers to deeper docs rather than full implementation details so the file remains a planning overview.
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Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed.
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In `@docs/en/storage/storagesystem_ceph/planning.mdx`:
- Around line 32-37: Add explicit day‑2 operations applicability for each
deployment pattern in the existing comparison table: for rows "Internal,
co-resident", "Internal, dedicated nodes", and "External" list which ACP day‑2
tasks still apply (monitoring, expansion, upgrades, backups, etc.) and which are
the responsibility of an external team; implement this by either adding a new
"Day‑2 operations" column to the table or a short explanatory paragraph below
the table that maps each pattern to the applicable operations and ownership
boundaries, ensuring the "External" row clearly states which ops remain with ACP
(e.g., consuming storage classes, backup configuration) versus the external
storage team's responsibilities (e.g., cluster expansion, Ceph upgrades).
- Around line 56-71: The Security Considerations section currently only covers
"Encryption in Transit"; expand it by adding brief forward-reference paragraphs
under the "Security Considerations" header that call out other planning areas:
"Encryption at Rest", "Authentication Model", and "RBAC/Authorization", and link
each to their respective how-to or planning pages (e.g., add references similar
to the existing "Configure in-transit encryption" link). Keep each new item 1–2
sentences explaining what to validate (e.g., key management for
encryption-at-rest, identity providers and Ceph auth for authentication model,
and role definitions for RBAC) and add pointers to deeper docs rather than full
implementation details so the file remains a planning overview.
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Approved. The planning guide is in a usable state for the current scope; the remaining resource-sizing refinement can follow up later as a non-blocking improvement.
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