[Website]: Self-managed tutorial document is very poorly written

[820149461]

Type of issue

None

What documentation page is affected

https://www.elastic.co/docs/deploy-manage/deploy/self-managed/tutorial-self-managed-secure

What happened?

This document is very poorly written

Additional info

No response

[yetanothertw]

Thank you for reporting this issue, @820149461!

After reviewing it, we have added it to our backlog for prioritization in an upcoming sprint. We will provide updates as we make progress. Your feedback is invaluable in maintaining the quality of our documentation.

[yetanothertw]

@820149461, if you're willing, could you help us understand better what wasn't working? For example:

• which section was problematic?
• was there anything that requires further clarification, or that is perhaps incorrect, or missing?
• what goals were you trying to achieve?

Even brief notes would be very helpful and help us make meaningful improvements.

[eedugon]

First PR in a series of improvements we are planning for both tutorials: #5542

During the review, we identified a broader set of follow-up issues across both guides, including technical accuracy problems, unclear security positioning, and places where the step-by-step flow needs to be improved. We plan to address those in subsequent PRs.